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angelblueyes
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0 posted 2003-08-01 02:18 AM


If I could turn back the hands of time.
What kind of life would I find?
As I look over the years.
I see there are many ghosts and fears.
I see a baby with no worries.
Across the floor she would scurry.
I see a toddler hopping around.
Full of life and fully abound.
I see a small girl, being hurt very young.
What in the world could this person have done?
I see a preteen with no emotion.
Too afraid to give her devotion.
I see a teenager being hurt again.
Wondering when in the world this will all end?
I see a young woman believing in someone.
Trying to ease all the pain the years have done.
I see a woman hurting a man.
Who only loves her, I don't understand?
An almost middleaged woman full of fears.
And all of the happenings over the years.
It feel's like it's all mixed up inside.
Sometime's she's scared of what she'll find.
But no matter what the years have brought.
From child to woman this person has fought.
For now it's time to stand my ground.
And change the person I have found.
For one day a beautiful woman will shine through.
And will be happy, full of life, and ever so true.

angelblueyes


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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2003-08-01 02:36 AM


Sounds to me like she is already shining through...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-01 02:52 AM


MVS:You do know how to make a girl feel better.
angelblueyes

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-08-01 03:03 AM


this has been a thought of mine too

wonderful ending, from a sad beginning...I am inspired!

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2003-08-01 07:03 AM


Looks to me like shes well on her way.
lovely poetic ponderings...well done poetess.

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

Bec
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5 posted 2003-08-01 07:38 AM


Hi angelblueyes...

You've fought and you've come through, that's the important thing. You're a survivor!

Bec

"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

Patricia
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6 posted 2003-08-01 08:06 AM


angelblueyes,

Lady...how cool is this poem.  Sounds like we are on the same journey at the same time in our lives.  I am keeping this one...so nice to know I am not alone!

A wonderful write, my poet friend.

Patricia

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-08-01 08:09 AM


she is there waiting for you
\she never left, did she?

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-08-01 08:13 AM


angelblueyes
Believe that and it will happen, enjoyed the write.

angelblueyes
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9 posted 2003-08-01 11:35 AM


passing shadows:Never thought I'd inspire anyone, but I'm glad you are.May life bring you all the happiness in the world

Janet Marie:Witht he help of soul searchin and facing it head on and wondeful friends like the one at Passions I know I'll make it through

Bec:We are all survivor's from one thing or another.May we all have the strength to make it through.

Patricia:First off you're never alone my friend The angels from above and my spirit and heart are always with you.Thanks for the comment it means alot

angelblueyes


angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-08-01 11:39 AM


inkedgoddess:No she just got buried a little deeper dow.Soon she will arise to fullness and nothing but light will shine around

Seymour Tabin:I am believing more everyday that anything is possible if I set my mind to it.Thanks my friend.

angelblueyes

Kahlil
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11 posted 2003-08-01 12:59 PM


You ARE beautiful.  Wishing you all the happiness with which you have blessed us all.
~K~

angelblueyes
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12 posted 2003-08-01 01:19 PM


Kahlil:Thanks so much.If Ic an return an ounce of blessing from which I have recieved here Iw ould give it up endlessly
angelblueyes

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