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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-08-01 01:12 AM


Rain pours down above my head,
I remember everything you said.
Hier kommt die Sonne,
Sie ist der hellste Stern von allen.
Hier kommt die Sonne.
Sun fades into an empty hollow,
Its rays I cannot follow.
Hier kommt die Sonne,
Sie ist der hellste Stern von allen.
Hier kommt die Sonne.
Knowing that I can't taste the rays,
Counting down the loneliest of days.
Hier kommt die Sonne,
Sie ist der hellste Stern von allen.
Hier kommt die Sonne.
Thought that you would be my ray of light,
Now it's nowhere in my sight.
Hier kommt die Sonne,
Sie ist der hellste Stern von allen.
Hier kommt die Sonne.
Forever in the shadow of dark,
On a mission of loneliness I embark.
Hier kommt die Sonne,
Sie ist der hellste Stern von allen.
Hier kommt die Sonne.
Hier kommt die Sonne....

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

© Copyright 2003 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-08-01 01:17 AM


Such power of emotion and such sadness.May it rain no more on you, but may the rays of sunshine forever light your way.
angelbueyes

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2003-08-01 01:21 AM


ah well...thanks but i dont see that happening anytime soon

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

x8x_bigmike
Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130
California, USA
3 posted 2003-08-01 01:39 AM


Im normally not a fan of bilingual poetry, but this was amazing...the way you crossed the line between the unknown to the defined, exellent work.

Mike

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
4 posted 2003-08-01 01:44 AM


got bored of bein normal..sounded good when i did it and thanks
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