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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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Rain pours down above my head, I remember everything you said. Hier kommt die Sonne, Sie ist der hellste Stern von allen. Hier kommt die Sonne. Sun fades into an empty hollow, Its rays I cannot follow. Hier kommt die Sonne, Sie ist der hellste Stern von allen. Hier kommt die Sonne. Knowing that I can't taste the rays, Counting down the loneliest of days. Hier kommt die Sonne, Sie ist der hellste Stern von allen. Hier kommt die Sonne. Thought that you would be my ray of light, Now it's nowhere in my sight. Hier kommt die Sonne, Sie ist der hellste Stern von allen. Hier kommt die Sonne. Forever in the shadow of dark, On a mission of loneliness I embark. Hier kommt die Sonne, Sie ist der hellste Stern von allen. Hier kommt die Sonne. Hier kommt die Sonne.... Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Such power of emotion and such sadness.May it rain no more on you, but may the rays of sunshine forever light your way. angelbueyes |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
ah well...thanks but i dont see that happening anytime soon Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
Im normally not a fan of bilingual poetry, but this was amazing...the way you crossed the line between the unknown to the defined, exellent work. Mike |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
got bored of bein normal..sounded good when i did it and thanks |
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