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Abandon (A Challenge)
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Abandon (A Challenge) |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Abandon hope, in an aquatic submarine. We are crashing. Nautically, accusing. Abandon, trust the religious heiroglyphs, paint flying cars and hysterical pyromaniacs. Abandon flame and watch the world burn away. Standing lightly on an ashtray, I abandon hope. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amen.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Standing lightly on an ashtray..."--what a powerful and effective image that is!  EA |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow...this puts new meaning to sinking fast. Breathe deep...catch your breath, on the wings of your next thought you'll be delivered by *hopes* life preserver!!!! I should know I almost drowned a million times, and I survived. I loved this write, because it brought me back to where I came from, and where I am now. You can do that, too!!!!!! Everyone can win. That's for sure!!!!! I only write this, becase I know how it feels, and how many times I thought I was going to jump off the edge, and would never be able to be revived. Never want to go there again. Keep your head up!   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
great choice of words, perfect. insanity is not a crime |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
brought an "awww" out of me nicely done M |
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