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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-07-31 01:33 PM



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~~*~~
She had a sense of bewilderment
was perplexed and confused
This feeling of being baffled
had her slightly and somewhat amused

It was a mystical feeling
as she looked into the skies
She could see the dream she had awakened from
clearly unfolding before her eyes

Every scene in her dream
was appearing just as she had seen
With little fairies and leprechauns
in a world where she was queen

In this land she saw so clearly
she felt like Alice in Wonderland
Or the fairy Godmother of Cinderella
with the magic wand in her hand

Who by waving her magic wand
could make her magic appear
of the gown, the slippers, the dance
and the prince who was so sincere

Now she is realizing
as upon these scenes she sees
She could make dreams happen
and make real her fantasies

In a land where all are happy
and all dreams can become true
For hers have unfolded before her eyes
for her to see clearly in plain view
~~*~~



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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-07-31 01:39 PM


I would like that!  

Nicely done!

Susan C.

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2 posted 2003-07-31 01:41 PM


Yeah, me too, Susan.  
Thank you.
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-07-31 01:43 PM


--and that "she" my dear, is you!

Lovely beyond words,

Linda

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4 posted 2003-07-31 01:56 PM


Thank you, Linda. I'm glad that you liked
my little magic.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-07-31 01:58 PM



Beautiful...magical...enchanting!
I love this!!!!!!
Challenge faced and conquered.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-07-31 03:36 PM


God Ethel, you are really shining here.
I thought this would be a tough one too
You have done beautifully and OMG
I love that graphic -
well met indeed and thank you
This is really good . . .
more than good -
its amazing
xxoo

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7 posted 2003-07-31 04:25 PM


God Ethel!! LOVEEEEE IT!!! I mean the picture down to the words..yanno I'm a sucker for this sort of thing right!? *runs off to find some batteries for her faerie wand*

Kristen

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