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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-07-31 08:40 AM


Finding a pocket in air, threading under the wind’s direction
Promising new voice, leaning forward with elaborate ideas
There is no hesitation, my dreams thinking with roving hands
Between all mental activities…
Amusing the impulses which flicker touching events
Gravity accepts that self presentation…remaining firmly different
Filled with deep extra sensory perceptions, light in weight
Neither asking my name or caring, simply visiting now and then
To what definition then, was the means of cultural production?
I never liked reading cosmopolitan…or Hollywood’s fabrications
Having equal access to a particular spirit
You feel the presence, and hear the overwhelming silence
Embracing all their accusations…expressing alternatives
I think I’m getting better at listening. Voice-driven by a natural
Theater, reading considerable volume of aesthetic homelessness
Which, by the way, is my choice….
Stretching towards the capacity of imagination
With the ability of feeding my own spirit, permitting correlative
Diversity of others, determined to feel their right of passage
Learning as we go…what amazing bravado’s!
Making room for faith…and the life of mind….at the library
Even with an animated presence….releasing internal designs
Best meal in my entire life!
Oh the identities of what they desire and formulas of many minds
Another way and side of expression…nonetheless, attempting a move
Of direction without being trendy or smug….we inherit immortality
Every quest for knowledge finding their urgent need, quenched with
Acceptance…as intellect stands by meaning, pronounced and fat
So, I pick the atlas up out of my trunk, and closing both eyes,
Point my finger to a town north…one of which I own a personal connection to…
Haply submitting to poetic intuition...why…because I’d like very much
To contribute something to the conversation.


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1 posted 2003-07-31 09:40 AM


"Point my finger to a town north…one of which I own a personal connection to…"


this line hit home with me...I love it! and always, I sit back and smile at how cool you write!

Saunni
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2 posted 2003-07-31 01:20 PM


Goodness, what an awesome write all the way through! Hugs right back to you also.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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