Open Poetry #27 |
Still Dancing |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
The gypsy still dances still sways to her own special beat Her hair flowing wild in her green eyes a challenge to meet The fire is burning but hotter within then without One look from those eyes leaves the watcher no reason to doubt… It’s said that her green eyes show nothing but gypsy-lust greed But those she has loved find them full of her passionate need And time can’t deny her a spirit that feeds on the night Her dance is her own and for her it is nothing but right… The music is playing but still she is dancing alone There’s nary a gypsy King waiting to make her his home Until she meets eyes that can hold in a spell of entrancing This gypsy girl-woman will move to her music Still dancing… Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-31-2003 08:30 AM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very nice writing....enjoyed it... thank you... Goldenrose. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you GR, and I'm a fan of yours also!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
shaking my tambourine and twirling my skirt over here--loved this. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness, this is breathtaking! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi there serenity blaze, and keep shaking that tambourine!!!!! Glad to have you out there dancing, and thanks for joining me! ~S~ Hi Saunni, and it's been awhile, hasn't it? I hope the music is still playing, and you are still dancing where you are...thank you too!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-31-2003 08:25 AM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this reminds me of some of the first of your poems I read. I love the gypsy in you. She lives here inside me too, though she is indeed stifled lately. Sandra |
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