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I Am... a challenge |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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I am hopeful and strong I wonder how it all began I hear one hand clapping I see an imaginary friend I am hopeful and strong I pretend I don't care I feel in love with the Bunny I touch the thoughts of the young I worry for the world of my children I cry for nothing... least of all lost loves I am hopeful and strong I understand the love of a child I say Small stuff is no sweat I dream the stages and roads I try for understanding of the false I hope for happiness and love I am hopeful and strong This was... interesting. Definately worth the trip for me to take... thanks for reposting the challenge. We see the light of those Who find the world has passed them by Too late to save a dream from growing cold... [This message has been edited by Ringo (07-30-2003 03:27 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You have met this challenge head on and it's fantastic!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nice, Ringo. Susan C. |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
makes me wanna know u even more.  I like it. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad - your resonating line: I am hopeful and strong . . . excellent attitude can you pass some of that my way please? challenge met well xxoo |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hear one hand clapping ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I try for understanding of the false I hope for happiness and love I am hopeful and strong ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Brad, I really like this one. I think this might be one o' my favorite. I guess as long as we keep this home and keep striving for understanding...we're all okay. Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Brad, this is really good. You have met the challenge and then some! Enjoyed. Chris |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I try for understanding of the false a great line.. *s M |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Nancy- your words are always apreciated. Thank You Susan- Thanks. Icyflamez- Having the respect for your writing that I do, I appreciate your kind words. Sue- I put some hopefulness and kindness in the overnight mail this afternoon. You should get it in another few years or so lol. Thanks. KS- I am truly glad that you enjoyed this little scribble. Chris- Thank you for the kind words. M- Thank You. We see the light of those |
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