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Ankaria
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since 2003-07-26
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Sask. Canada

0 posted 2003-07-30 02:20 PM


I wish'd and wanted
          Knowing that I could never achieve
the things that I so adamantly desired.

        I'd sit and imagine that I had everything
but I had nothing.

My extraordinary dreams dulled down.
      I wanted what I knew I could get
and
    I wanted nothing more.

I now realize I can set my dreams free again
    I can have anything,
                          be anything.

Just watch me wish...


© Copyright 2003 Anne-Marie H. - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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1 posted 2003-07-30 02:23 PM


forgot how this feels but a lovely write to read ,thanks
jellybeans
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2 posted 2003-07-30 02:25 PM


guess I will ditto aenimal on this...forgot what it is to wish.....thank you
Janette
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3 posted 2003-07-30 08:02 PM


and may your dreams all come true.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-07-31 03:00 AM


how inspiring!
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2003-07-31 03:02 AM


Yeah, I gave up on wishing when I realized I was cheating by blowing
my eyelashes off of my finger
without licking it first..

Lovely write, sweets.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
6 posted 2003-07-31 06:03 AM


You've got it...your dreams are only limited by your own imagination!!  So raise your sights, and wish with your heart!!  Great write..~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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West Virginia
7 posted 2003-07-31 08:01 AM


Incredibly moving write here!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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