Open Poetry #27 |
Winged Unicorn |
Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
Happiness softly erased the sad from the night As two hearts merged with joy then descend in flight Cascading into abyss of emotions Heart to heart Drifting Upon loves winged unicorn~ Essence of tender wings founded an isolated paradise Where bliss flows like a river Heaven was so precise Love blossom as elysian fields of wildflowers A garden of Eden Animated by joys effervescing powers~ Meantimes rain of angry storms poured down upon paradise The demise of love was brutal, exorbiant price Loves tender wildflowers slowly disfigured and thorned The loving creature evolved with two hearts Viciosly horned~ The memory reaches to capture the splendor that was born Always to be lured in the pain Garden of thorns Only joyful wings of the heart can enter Into loves paradise And then percieve with profund tender loving emotions True love within its awesome wonder As it is softly born~ Molly Susan Vessels [This message has been edited by Balladeer (07-30-2003 05:23 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You certainly don't need any lessons in desciptive writing! That was wonderful! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMolly~ This is really pretty~ 'Only joyful wings of the heart can enter Into loves paradise And then percieve with profund tender loving emotions True love within its awesome wonder As it is softly born~' Like that poetic thought most of all~ Welcome to Passions dear lady~ We're going to become good friends ... I can tell~ You are welcome to drop me a note at noles1@totcon.com anytime you'd like. *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Enjoyed this lovely write that captured my imagination so fully!! We're so glad to have you here...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very beautiful picture and writing, miss. Write on!! |
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