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feast of the round table (New challenge--2-g)
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feast of the round table (New challenge--2-g) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Then she paused in search of lack. Finding it--she wept.  Thanks Sunshine! I think I was worried the link would count as syllable.  [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (07-30-2003 07:01 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey gal, put the link to the challenge in here as well...so folks don't drive themselves bonkers trying to figure out your 2-g meaning! LOL... What do you mean, "not good"? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. I'm still trying to pull the duct tape off of my mouth. (not easy for me to say more with less...unless it's one of those "two word and under" poems...grin?) |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent. I'll be back...when I'm awake ..maybe give it a go. Love ya lady! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Nuff said, very good.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, But Karen, it is . . . I cannot write these for anything you did so beautifully and a lot left to the mind *applauding* a senyru in Serenity style xxoo |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well now, Karen sweet witchypoo....I don't believe I have ever seen you write one of these. Hush my mouth! It's great!! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
smiling hug |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I want to sound intelligent here..round table..king arthur always comes to mind..can I think of gwynhefar when I read this!?  lovely nonetheless..and you still bringing me those batteries for my wand then??? lol...If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wubberly senryu o' gorgeousone. 'Tis good, 'tis very good.  Maree. fate is not just |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ok, I'm smiling. . . but, it is good. . . great work my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person, but to one person, you may be the world. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was very good.I'm sure you can meet any challenge. angelblueyes |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good senryu, oh Serene One. You met the challenge very well, Karen. I love this little verses.  Hugs  Ethel |
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