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In The Comfort Of Your Need
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In The Comfort Of Your Need |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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”IN THE COMFORT OF YOUR NEED” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Once when the stars danced with the moon, and the night skies smiled in harmony, I whispered to you of a heart beating, one captured with charm of your melody… I sang of your eyes that pierce with deepness, ones that mesmerized mine filled with want, of their telling desires longing for contentment, and when I’m afar they still come and haunt… Warm is the skin of your embrace of softness, tender are moist lips on mine that feed, you give all of your being to one captured, such is your caress in the comfort of your need… ~~~~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you are the king of romance, how do you do it continuously without getting us jaded........ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
These summer days definitely are hot! Wonderful romantica write. Love, Margherita  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, BC, would that we all could find comfort in that loving need.....beautifully written, touching my heart this morning....~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Outstanding...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Very lovely Poet sir.. the phrasing of this is wonderfully poetic ... such a lovely write of devotion. Well done. "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I love your style! But you knew that, didn't you? A beautiful verse, Bill... Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill, you just keep getting better and better...amazing write. Your heart is so full of love and romance.. Especially love this piece..a keeper. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hay Bill nice going, enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I didn't even realize I had a need that needed comforting until I read your words! lol   EA |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
It always amazes me how easily romance seems to flow from your pen and what pleasure it gives to read. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill, yes . . . the ghosts just dont seem to leave us alone now, do they? beautiful, as they always are xxoo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I especially liked the shimmer of humanity, and understood this on an emotional level... Well done Bill. TD |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
WOW!!! Another steamy and passionate poem. But I like the way you bring in the comfort of the need. Sometimes, the comfort of love is worth all the waiting. ***Ivy Rose |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*Sighs* you are a regular casanova of romance...I love this~ Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You are the king of romance, the keeper of hearts, and the knight of souls.You amaze me everytime and I can always read you over and over again.Very well done. angelbueyes |
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