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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-07-29 09:55 PM

Of stars that dance on shadow
And dust the lids their light
Entwined with every sigh a loud
Spells linger on through night

While we explore the cosmos
A comet our traverse
As music of celestial fire
Our love song sung in verse

Spells of intuition merge
Your spirit glows with mine
And blinds in binds so magical
To float of seas divine

You scent my skin with ecstasy
As velvet covered dew
To rest, in bouyance peaceably
Within this dream of you

Copyright Kkh 7/29/03

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-07-29 10:13 PM

Beautiful Kathleen..you have such a unique soft touch with your pen...
Very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-07-29 10:19 PM

wonderful write,,,

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2003-07-29 10:24 PM

"You scent my skin with ecstasy
As velvet covered dew
To rest, in bouyance peaceably
Within this dream of you"

Nicely said....all of it.

Ed

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-07-29 10:30 PM

Very lovely TD. A keeper for sure. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2003-07-29 10:32 PM

touching poem

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-29-2003 10:32 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2003-07-29 10:52 PM

I wrote a poetic reply to this, but for some
reason, it didn't go thru....sheesh...

Beautiful Poem K.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-07-29 11:50 PM

ThisDiamond - I read this as I sit on a star waiting to dance in shadows...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-07-29 11:57 PM

Spells of intuition merge
Your spirit glows with mine
And blinds in binds so magical
To float of seas divine

only in dreams it seems, but a girl can dream.................

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2003-07-30 10:56 AM

0h what a beatiful write, very much enjoyed, thank you

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

10 posted 2003-07-30 11:15 AM

Dancing on shadow indeed with such beautiful poetic music. Beautiful poem.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-07-30 11:39 AM

While we explore the cosmos
A comet our traverse
As music of celestial fire
Our love song sung in verse

~*~

This is a song, m'dear...
and a very good one it is...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-07-30 03:42 PM

A silky beautiful flow...James

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

13 posted 2003-07-30 03:45 PM

Kathleen,

This verse is so pretty...I loved it.

"You scent my skin with ecstasy
As velvet covered dew
To rest, in bouyance peaceably
Within this dream of you"

the first sentence...wow..I want that..

Susan C.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

14 posted 2003-07-30 04:22 PM

TD,

This is just lovely...describes the way it should be perfectly.

Patricia

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