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When Once I Knew
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When Once I Knew |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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When Once I Knew I have no canvas to touch with the heart of my heart, no trust in the windows of eyes that fade the colors quaint. Vacant, where fiction once stood between the lines romanced, the shelf upon which wishes were laid and dreams were polished till the armor shone in the dark of night. When once I knew, my words no longer have meaning, each released with emptiness, leaving only a trail of dampness behind. To lack intentions, to lose one's purpose of word leaves me somewhere, anywhere but between the lines. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Such a sad poem.The next to the last stanza brought tears to my eyes but there is always hope. Maggie |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write M  bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
i fully enjoyed reading this, I feel like that at times. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HeySweetGirlieFriend~ Your poetic canvas is still brushed with word-magic~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wish to thank you for your kind words. hugs M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"When once I knew, my words no longer have meaning, each released with emptiness, leaving only a trail of dampness behind." Maybe the wrong people are listening... I think your words hold much meaning...and I enjoy hearing them.. Susan C. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 god M...this rips me up |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*sniffles* I ditto shadows.. I ditto her to no end. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Susan, never the wrong people listening, just a deaf ear at times  Thank you hugss Dixie, not meant to make you sad, just a release of feelings...thank you Dixie and Kaoru. Maureen |
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