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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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How fitting this day to unlock reasoning and deliver reality You, infact are the reason my reality is worn wiry and unbalanced To think today, I so nearly brought last nights nightmare to senseless life believing my dreams to be law Weigh my mistakes and re balance the peace I had before she cried your inabilities into my today, my future. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is deeply beautiful. Eric |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
Very nice; I enjoyed reading this. Nixa, Laq |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
To think today, I so nearly brought last nights nightmare to senseless life believing my dreams to be law sounds like you could use a few new dreams..gemma, peace..... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I wonder ... ...if it rains in our daydreams, could it form the dream into a rainbow?  Here's to the pot of gold that awaits you at the end of your dreams!! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah isn't that the way, you earn yourself a moment's peace and have it taken away..I wish you all the peace in the world and know you'll find it someday if not see you in counselling..grins |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
To think today, I so nearly brought last nights nightmare to senseless life believing my dreams to be law this is great the whole poem is you have an intense style very cool |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very deep |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
To think today, I so nearly brought last nights nightmare to senseless life believing my dreams to be law Weigh my mistakes and re balance the peace I had before she cried your inabilities Yes, very deep, sweet Gemma.... Is everything okay? I hope so!! Let's go flying in the sky, today, and then maybe we won't have nightmares tonight??  Gary and I will see you and your Love way, way in the sky....... Hugs to you, Little Lady  Ethel Mae |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your reality be fresh and balanced and your nights be full of sweet dreams! Loving hugs, EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey gem: You, infact are the reason my reality is worn wiry and unbalanced ha - this I know is why I stay away from people lol amazing writing always always surprising me I like that xxoo |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"You, infact are the reason my reality is worn wiry and unbalanced" I love this Gem! Wonderful write |
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