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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-07-29 06:24 AM



Tiny blue gift box, inside , silver heart locket,
beautiful, love token, I cherish,
his love inside, like a pocket,

Sweet romantic gift, kissed upon and wished,
I wear it around my neck,
Carrying his heart close to mine, cherished,

In sleep it is there, rolling through my hair,
His love rested upon my chest,
Locket of love he has sent with love and care,

Chosen just form, a precious treasure,
My love loves me, endlessly,
When I look at the locket, I smile with pleasure,

All throughout my day, his love is with me,
Wrapped around my neck tightly,
His love I carry all day, relentlessly

Loves locket hangs down upon my heart,
at last his heart and mine together,
One resting, lying on top of the other,

Loves locket, his love token,
Two hearts, one on each side,
Loves gift, no words need spoken,

Loves locket dangles around my neck with pride,
Holding my loves, love inside.


True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-29-2003 06:25 AM).]

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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-07-30 05:42 AM


Hi.....this is a really beautiful poem, and I enjoyed the tenderness and sentiments here. I didn't respond earlier, because I somehow felt that it was a private poem between just the two of you.  But, as it is posted here, I think it really deserves response, and I am hoping that it gets more. Your writing shouldn't be overlooked, as it is elegant in it's feelings....~~S~~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-07-30 05:44 AM


Now I want to go and buy my sweetheart a locket and fill it with love...James
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

3 posted 2003-07-30 07:41 AM


My heart is your heart my love....the locket shows my pride for our love for all to see...thank you my love for the sweet words...

love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxx


A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2003-07-31 03:48 AM


Sunny~thanks so much for replying, glad you did, when you are in love, you want to show the world, tell the world, especially if your a poet! I post FOR EVERYONE TO READ!!! so does Goldenrose. The worst slap in the face for a poet is to not be read or replied to...they are dedicated, but not private..if so I would just email them..so keep reading and replying! thanks!

James~ go and buy one for the one you love, it will make her happy just from the sentiment..if she is simple and sentimental, she will cherish it!

Gold...you are so sweet..(our)two hearts beat as one..become one..my heart is your heart...I love the heart locket, I wear it for the whole world to see(same as our poetry)...and I love you! xxxx~love~ARH


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-31-2003 03:52 AM).]

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