Open Poetry #27 |
Loves Sweet Sorrow (part one) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
She flung open the grande balcony windows the balmy night semingly added to her despair tears fell softly down upon ivory cheeks she no longer his love, his lady fair. Sounds of hoof beats filled the air on mounted stead he galloped away pain flowed in flooding her soul her heart cried, begging him to stay. In reflection she looked over yon garden where so oft' they walked hand in hand it's beauty she could no longer see this seeming to be a final reprimand. The silver moon slid behind the clouds the eve no longer illuminated by Lunas light she sat down at the mahogany writing desk but it was futile, for she could not write. With delicate hand she turned back the quilt of her favorite antique victorian bed and she fluffed the lace trimmed pillows then laid down to rest her weary head. Her heart would not grant her the peace praying dreams to come before the morrow alas though, sleep was not meant to be in this night full of loves sweet sorrow. {From 10-20-01 reposted for those who have asked that since my mind refuses to work while on these medications that I repost some of my older work for others to enjoy until I can get back up to par. Thank you all for your continued thoughts as I muddle through the pain and therapy.Peace to poetry land.} ~D~ I must have had my momma's will |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
Thank you so much for reposting this one, as I had not read it before, and I found it to be so very lovely.....~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know what it took to even go look for an old poem of piece while in dis-ease... So know we here to rally and cheer that you soon regain health, be your old self... in the meantime, we've all got God's ear! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice writing...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sweet Donna...This is so beautiful! Thank you for reposting your words for us to read. We all love and miss you terribly.. and pray for good health to return to you soon. ~Soft smiles & Gentle hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - gently written from the pen of a gentle spirit... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, you selected a wonderful piece of your writing to grace us with while you are recovering from your accident. I thoroughly enjoyed this reading experience. Please find some more! I continue to send up prayers for a full and speedy recovery, Dear One. I have been missing your presence at Passions. Love & healing hugs, Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, Donna...I will love reading your wonderful poetry over again. Our new members will certainly get a wonderful treat by reading your poems for the first time. Hope you are feeling well very soon!! Hugs to you, sweet lady Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Donna, Not sure we have "met", so.. hey! This was a very beautiful, touching piece and I, for one, am glad you took the time to repost... I hope you are feeling better soon. Susan C. |
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