little wing's challenge- kiss me away

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Open Poetry #27

little wing's challenge- kiss me away

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2003-07-28 06:17 PM

ok, lets see, joy, when am i joyful?

turning up my tear stained eyes
finding rain to cease the rivers flow
a smile breaks the listeners stride
it's only mine, a striking glance

souls connect when i give away
my secrets and give myself to you
fully and unconditionally
this is where my life rests
and the rest is floating away
while the rain stills continues on

is that good? boy i have had writers block....prolly not the write emotion, but i will live

its slightly happy isn't it?

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-28 07:02 PM

I know how hard it is to be happy Ri. lol..my attempt is actualy pretty sad. but this is joyfull enough for me to pass. good job..bunny

insanity is not a crime

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

2 posted 2003-07-28 07:03 PM

Would ya find it in your heart..to make this go away? And let me rest in pieeeeces...

(I'm going to start a thread in the lounge about songs that get stuck in your head

)

insanity is not a crime

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-28-2003 07:05 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-07-29 03:03 AM

Riley!!!
Yes, it sure is . . .
challenge well met indeed

a smile breaks the listeners stride

joy it be and a smile on my face
thank you so very much!
I am proud of you
Joy is a toughy
it's Liz's fault
xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-29 03:48 AM

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