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Open Poetry #27

Lonely Place

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-07-28 05:21 AM

I smiled at their doubts,
secure in his love.
Now I sit in this

lonely place
at the back of beyond
wrapped in deepening twilight,

an unripe moon unable to define
blotchy words.

"no longer love"
"no one else"

I laugh and tell them
it was but a diversion,

my tears I will save
for this lonely place.

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-07-28 06:16 AM

nice write,,,

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-07-28 03:44 PM

Enjoyed...interesting that you would associate a smile with a lonely place...
did the smile match the actions...James

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-07-28 05:07 PM

I like this

insanity is not a crime

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-07-28 05:22 PM

Goodness.

So many questions
one can pick up from this.

Your poetry dwells in mystery, it does...
and it does it very well.

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-07-28 06:15 PM

I smiled at their doubts,
secure in his love.
Now I sit in this

lonely place
at the back of beyond
wrapped in deepening twilight,

Oh...you touched me with this. I hear your words and believe I should heed them.

An excellent write.

Patricia

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-29 04:31 AM

sad but i like it

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