Open Poetry #27 |
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To Have The Have Nots |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows ![]() |
Walking in shadows as all you sunlight drinkers say I'm wrong to be I speak my feelings knowing how many footsteps you could walk as me while you criticize with mirrored inspirations I am walking free ©2003 by icebox |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"while you criticize with mirrored inspirations I am walking free" No criticism here...just smiles. ![]() You're so cool. ![]() "My friends are my estate." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Amen! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Right on! Never change that about yourself. Oh man, you have been a big help to me this morning, thank you! |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
No doubt about that -- you are one of a kind. ....and this one hits my library. I want to read it again, at random times, just as a reminder to be who I am, as you are who you are without reminders. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox The way you write your truth is real and warm, even in shadows. ![]() |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
That's tellin' 'em! No one knows what *really* goes on inside you. How can they? They aren't in your skin. They don't know what your thoughts are, and what your reasons are when you do something, yet they criticize. This write showed me strength to stand for yourself, and also strength to see that others, in their judging only show their narrow way of thinking!! If they do not ask then they only have a narrow, thin bit of information in which to make their opinion about you, or your actions. They should get the information from the horses mouth first then make their judgement call. If they know the information then, and only then can they make an opinion, and then it's not for any *us* to judge. That's Gods job. Too big a pair shoes to wear for me. Just my thoughts. Thank you for letting me express them. ![]() SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks ice i needed to read this today |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
sunlight drinkers! bloody amazing. one for the library. ![]() Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your quill is brill and this is definitely a ![]() Love reading your thoughts and philosophies! You have your own special niche here as Passions, Dear Box of Ice! ![]() ![]() EA |
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