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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-26 03:35 PM

            I am

I am liquid, or so I am told
          can't quite decide who is me
I wonder if I'll ever fit the mold
          emotions more like potpourri
I hear tarnish on this fluid gold
          love comes with no guaranty
I see my future written out in bold
          all my mistakes lit the marquee
I want back a soul once sold
          my heart races wild and free
I am liquid, or so I am told
          can't quite decide who is me
I pretend I understand my form
          change comes with all I see
I feel only touch can make you warm
          yet, too warm in steam I flee
I touch emotions start to swarm
          love can bring such jubilee
I worry within my heart so torn
          alone my heart an amputee
I cry then become a ragging storm
          holding back now is no luxury
I am liquid, or so I am told
          can't quite decide who is me
I understand how love grows cold
          never heart break to foresee
I say I have love…behold
          voided heart filled with glee
I dream love can be paroled
          ever to adore to be the decree
I try my heart not to scold
          giving in or letting go the key
I hope again my arms will hold
          the risk of love to be
I am liquid, or so I am told
          can't quite decide who is me

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-26-2003 03:56 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-07-26 03:46 PM

Helen:

A masterpiece . . .

I am liquid, or so I am told
can't quite decide who is me

yes you are
liquid
grace

Beautiful writing and God,
this one just tugs at the strings you know?
Yes, you do
xxoo

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-07-26 04:50 PM

I hope again my arms will hold
the risk of love to be
I am liquid, or so I am told
can't quite decide who is me

beautiful...
*s
M

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-07-26 07:07 PM

I hope again my arms will hold
the risk of love to be

They will red, you are more than this place

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-26 09:05 PM

damn, that's awesome!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-07-26 09:07 PM

Beautifully written!
hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-07-26 09:15 PM

Yes, you are mercurial liquid...
a quicksilver study
emotions in motion...

a beautiful write.

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

7 posted 2003-07-28 10:17 AM

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Ramon
Junior Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 28

8 posted 2003-07-28 10:21 AM

a great song

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