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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-07-26 03:31 PM



And such gifts
I have been
Given -
Untold treasures laid
With grace.

This life itself has
Open arms...to invite such
Sweet embrace.

And each gift I bless and
Cherish true...holding
Deep within my
Heart.

Yet none
Compare
As deep my love -

As how I cherish
You.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2003-07-26 03:43 PM


Eric . . .

This is endearing, My God
a lucky woman indeed
xxoo

Beautiful!

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-07-26 03:45 PM


I could a scene like Romeo on bended knee reciting these words to Juliet...so pretty!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Christina24rb
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3 posted 2003-07-26 03:46 PM



     *sigh* very nice indeed!! beautifully written!  

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Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-07-26 03:49 PM


WOW!!  She is one lucky lady indeed!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-07-26 03:51 PM


A Hallmark moment, indeed! One that I am sure she will "Cherish"!
Patricia
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6 posted 2003-07-26 05:06 PM


Oh Eric, this is simply beautiful!  You know you really must go teach men how they should speak...  

I am thinking of somebody right now who really needs a lesson!

Patricia


ecrivan
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7 posted 2003-07-26 05:07 PM


yes, a lucky lady to be so cherished...enjoyed


SEA
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with you
8 posted 2003-07-26 05:26 PM


definately should teach this.... makes such lovely *sighs*
angelblueyes
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9 posted 2003-07-26 05:34 PM


Ericc:This is absolutlely beautiful and endearing.The lady is lucky that recieves this from you.
angelblueyes

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-07-26 06:46 PM


very sweet words
*s
M

Poe_Pot_Pie
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11 posted 2003-07-26 06:47 PM


Beautiful! I think it's better than Hallmark! Rock on!!
Margherita
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12 posted 2003-07-27 05:03 AM


My teacher of Love,
I am on your Path,
walking besides you,
cherishing you too.
every day I start
with a grateful heart


Your words, across time and space, gain in beauty and intensity.

They would be blessed at Hallmarks if they had someone like you, to convey a cosmic message of love ... your words are seeds of love destined to be scattered in countless hearts ...

I love you. Margherita

Makes me think of Van Gogh's "Il seminatore"

A Romantic Heart
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13 posted 2003-07-28 07:04 PM


Sure was a Hallmark moment! very beautiful!

thanks for sharing your heart~ARH

Ratleader
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14 posted 2003-07-29 12:22 PM


....and a fine Hallmark Moment it is....nicely Hallmarked, my good fellow.....

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Kethry
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15 posted 2003-07-29 12:26 PM


A @-->-- for rembrance. Definitely a Hallmark moment.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
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16 posted 2003-07-29 02:36 AM


what a moment!
garysgirl
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17 posted 2003-07-29 03:05 AM


Yet none
Compare
As deep my love -

As how I cherish
You.



Oh yes, Eric....I do know this!!  
Hugs  
Ethel


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