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arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

0 posted 2003-07-25 03:20 PM

Fairy laughter

I am the Watcher on the hill.
Dark the night and all is still.
Crystal bright the faint stars gleam.
Yet nothing is ever what it seems!

Silent the stones stand circle round.
Enclosed an ancient hallowed ground.
Nothing moves ,my lips in prayer.
Calling forth the changeling Hare!

As the moon slips from behind a cloud.
In the circle centre erect and proud.
By moonlight now the change displayed.
Gone the Hare,now see the Maid!

Bright her eyes from jewels made.
Flashing green ,deep coloured jade.
Black her hair long hanging glows.
Shining silks her wantons cloths.

White and proud her rounded breast.
Hidden and reveiled by her silken dress.
Now she moves,or is it flows?
Beneath her clinging liquid clothes.

Now she dances,wild music rare.
Called by magic from the still night air.
She leaves the circle and I must follow after.
A slave to the sound of her fairy laughter.

arthur
notes-in english folklore the hare is a magical creature
Britain is full of round stone circles ,5000 years old,magical-but whose magic?

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-07-25 03:21 PM

I enjoyed this.The flow,the imagery.it was great.
angelblueyes

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-07-25 03:24 PM

Delightful! Loved it!

Love, Life, & Fairy Laughter!
EA

Christina24rb
Junior Member

since 2003-07-25

Posts 13
Georgia

3 posted 2003-07-25 03:25 PM

wow!! very nice! descriptive!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-07-25 03:26 PM

Now she dances,wild music rare.
Called by magic from the still night air.
She leaves the circle and I must follow after.
A slave to the sound of her fairy laughter.

Arthur, this is beautiful. I could almost see
the fairy dancing around.

Hugs

Ethel

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-07-25 03:27 PM

arthur...I so enjoyed reading this...the rhythm...
the flow...it simply dances off the page.
Well done.
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-07-25 03:27 PM

Intriguing write!
Enjoyed the mysticism and glamour. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-07-25 03:59 PM

"Now she dances,wild music rare.
Called by magic from the still night air.
She leaves the circle and I must follow after.
A slave to the sound of her fairy laughter."

Michael..this is pure magic!!
The rhythm and flow is wonderful..
and I love the storyline..
I do hope we see more from you like this.
~Smiles & Hugs across the pond, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-07-25 04:04 PM

Silky flow...James

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

9 posted 2003-07-25 04:43 PM

Wonderfully descriptive, Michael...it flowed with magically images...

believe in what your heart feels...

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