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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-07-25 11:04 AM

I am combined of give and smiles
I wonder how we shall travel the miles
I hear all echoes through the night
I see in you poems, vision’s delight
I want peacefulness to gift to you
I am combined of give and smiles

I pretend my poets are here with me
I feel I set imaginations free
I touch your heart with dreams to see
I worry that you know not how much
I cry that you may have love in your touch
I am combined of give and smiles

I understand all you say
I say that we shall have our day
I dream of the promises yet to be
I try to make this belief, reality
I hope to make all your days worthwhile
I am combined of give and smiles

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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-07-25 11:10 AM

Karilea, just as beautiful as you are, my friend.
I love this.

Hugs to you

Ethel

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-07-25 11:10 AM

Karilea,

Beautiful...give and smiles...that is how I see you...

Susan C.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-07-25 11:25 AM

Karilea:You are giving and smiles.From the first reponse you gave to all of your wondrous writes.You are truly a wondrous spirit.
angelblueyes

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2003-07-25 11:37 AM

You do make days worthwhile... and I thank you for it... and every smile! *S*

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2003-07-25 11:37 AM

Karilea...You give me smiles all the time.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-07-25 11:57 AM

Karilea, my sister poet:
You ARE...combined of give and smiles...
A sunkist orange, bright and sweet.
TD

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2003-07-25 12:02 PM

Karilea, you summed yourself up pretty well. Continue to send your sunshine, it's keeping our hearts warm...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2003-07-25 05:38 PM

Written with gossamer.

And yes, this IS you.

Full of give and smiles.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-07-25 05:43 PM

and that you are indeed Karilea
shining light for me always
beautiful
xxoo

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2003-07-25 06:26 PM

you gave me a smile

as you always do.

M

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

11 posted 2003-07-25 06:46 PM

"I pretend my poets are here with me
I feel I set imaginations free
I touch your heart with dreams to see
I worry that you know not how much
I cry that you may have love in your touch
I am combined of give and smiles"

You made this seem so easy Kari. I tried it last night at the moth's request and my efforts were laughable, at best. Love this verse.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2003-07-25 06:49 PM

This is beautiful, Karilea...as are you.
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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