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PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2003-07-25 10:07 AM


I am reminded always of you
In all of the dark and quiet times
And the thought pierces me through
My empty longing mind
Cleaving a path straight and true
To where thoughts of you shine

Helpless to thinking another way
Than these thoughts as such
Pardon the words that I say
The pressure is just too much
Forgive my remembering today
Of how it was when we touched

When, at times it becomes so real
It is almost all that I do,
Thinking of how it used to feel
Before time quickly flew
It is something I cannot conceal
I am reminded of you


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Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
1 posted 2003-07-25 10:15 AM


It is OK to remember, PK.  You need not ask for forgiveness...for what you have chose to keep tucked away in your mind is yours.  Perhaps one day the memories will bring joy instead of the sadness I feel touch me with this read.

A lovely write!

Patricia

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 362
New Orleans, LA
2 posted 2003-07-25 10:54 AM


Thank you so much Patricia.
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