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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-07-25 08:06 AM


As i watch you fly away, i know that you will come back one day.

Beautiful white dreams slicing the sky and dark storm clouds.
You part of nature, you masters of flight and sounds.

Down the years your simple beauty has graced our presence, your life partner always at your side.

Gliding gracefully in our pristeen white scene, you carry great dignity and pride.

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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-07-25 08:13 AM


Very pretty...felt like a song being sang softly accompianied by guitar. Lovely, lovely words!

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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-07-25 08:36 AM


how beautiful, elegant, graceful...thank you for sharing
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-07-25 10:17 PM


Swans are a symbol of love and mate for life....you do them poetic justice with your words...xxx love~ARH
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