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Open Poetry #27
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JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
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California, Usa

0 posted 2003-07-25 05:33 AM



you stop my motion
yearning
to move
I can't...

See why you're blind?

© Copyright 2003 Byron Keith Landry Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Janette
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Chicagoland for now
1 posted 2003-07-26 12:56 PM


Yes, the picture is clear.

Interesting write here.

Nan
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2 posted 2003-07-26 08:39 AM


Introspectively intriguing...
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-07-26 01:30 PM


cool..wow
SweetSerenity
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since 2003-02-16
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Canada
4 posted 2003-07-26 04:39 PM


I liked this.
Good job.

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-07-26 04:48 PM


A ponderer of a poem!


EA

Kahlil
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6 posted 2003-07-27 01:26 PM


yeah, i know this....well worded
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