Open Poetry #27 |
The End |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The End I can't pretend to be what I'm not and neither can you. Someday you will say I'm not the man in your dreams. That day will be the end of me and you. JamesLee July25 2003 |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
James, This speaks of such sadness.I hope that you have found or will find the one that truly makes you happy.Wether sad or happy I enjoy your writes. angelblueyes |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
I know james...I know. Keep your head up. and the best advice I could give.. Lean on Jesus. Men just screw stuff up. Jai [This message has been edited by JaiOfHeaven (07-25-2003 05:50 AM).] |
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Ramon Junior Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 28 |
I like this |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
James, I believe the hardest part of life is letting go of those we love most...and yet the greatest gift we can give them....peace my friend. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You are so right! Be who you are so that the relationship is "real." We were discussing this very thing last night. Excellent write! Patricia |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
JamesMichael: I can only think of one word that describes this - beautiful. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Oh my, I sure hope she never utters those words ... you are not the man of my dreams ... cause if she does ... pooof ... she will lose a fabulous man. Enjoyed the truths in this one. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it happens, don't sweat it |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
So sad..this is. I'm pretty sensitive to this issue lately.. Losing love.. Almost anything could keep me from crying, but this is not it. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, James, it is painful when something inside tells you that there may be an end...but it doesn't always work out that way. Hugs coming your way...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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