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Open Poetry #27

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trevorskogsbergh
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 129
South Pasadena, CA

0 posted 2003-07-25 02:13 AM

In quiet night I silently dreamed
That I could see for miles around
Amidst a garden full of clouds
I could barely see the ground
Above the mountains but below the sky
I await the silent dawn
I sit and stare and begin to smile
As then I start to yawn
Sleepily I lie upon a cloud
That's floating up in the sky
I twist and turn at my fading vision
My dream begins to die
Again I awake amongst the clouds
To the sounds of noisy grunts
To my alarm, I'm standing on
The shoulders of giants

Better to die, and sleep
The never-waking sleep, than linger on
And dare to live when the souls life is gone.

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

1 posted 2003-07-25 05:56 AM

Firstly, you look kinda comical.
That's good.
Secondly, your poetry is surreal.
Not bad....just makin a point.
It was cool and different man.
Thanks and keep striving to write more.

Jai

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