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Lady In White
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0 posted 2003-07-24 03:39 PM





Slight eighteenmo held
Fingerslips of poetry
Dear to her own heart

~*~

Parchment four by six
Epistle’s dispatch inked blue
Tucked in skirt’s pocket

~*~

In the quiet times
Breeze on cheek with sun in hair
She reads poetry


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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-07-24 03:46 PM


!!!

This is so cool!
The style really rocks.


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2 posted 2003-07-24 03:58 PM


Sunlit ponderings in the quiet of day.

Enjoyed.

~Tier

PKreturns
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3 posted 2003-07-24 03:58 PM


I love the picture.
The poem makes me wonder what kind of poetry she reads.

bslicker
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4 posted 2003-07-24 04:02 PM


good one Lady

bernie

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Bernie Slicker

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5 posted 2003-07-24 06:21 PM


In the quiet times
Breeze on cheek with sun in hair
She reads poetry


Lovely images here Lady

enjoyed

Maree


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6 posted 2003-07-24 06:26 PM


Lovely, lovely Lady!
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7 posted 2003-07-24 06:27 PM


Oh, how nice dear Lady. Love the pic too. It makes me wish I could will myself into it and climb that tree to quietly watch the goings on beneath. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

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8 posted 2003-07-24 07:03 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Lady.
I love these senryus, and you presented it beautifully.
Hugs  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-07-24 07:48 PM


Now my memory is tested--the plantation home at Chalmette Battlefield? Long Vue Gardens?
Or one of the many gorgeous homes Uptown?

smile. Good thing YOU kept the keepsake.

Gorgeous you.


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10 posted 2003-07-24 08:09 PM


fabulous, you have alot of talent

Last night, i was looking at the stars, wondering where the hell did my ceiling go?!

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11 posted 2003-07-25 07:30 PM


and I do picture you sitting as thus
this is lovely
xxoo

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