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Open Poetry #27

I Saw You

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2003-07-24 03:24 PM

I saw your face in the sunset
Filling me with awe at the beauty
So elemental, carefree and wild
Such the fantasy in my reality

I saw you rise up from the waves
A jewel washed from the sea
Unattainable, a fairy tale
And I, lost in your story

I saw you in black with eyes so sad
Wondered at what it could be
To make it all seem possible
To give you the reality in your fantasy

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2003-07-24 03:47 PM

PK, you've not lost your fine touch
with the ink, and quill. Well done, Sir.

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2003-07-24 03:56 PM

Lady, I believe I have. But your reply leaves me hope....thank you sincerely.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-07-24 04:16 PM

"I saw you rise up from the waves
A jewel washed from the sea
Unattainable, a fairy tale
And I, lost in your story"

I absolutely love this part, and the entire poem.....

JingleBear
Member

since 2003-05-08

Posts 76
Pennsylvania, USA

4 posted 2003-07-24 05:27 PM

I enjoyed reading this. Very picturesque.

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