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PKreturns
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0 posted 2003-07-24 03:24 PM


I saw your face in the sunset
Filling me with awe at the beauty
So elemental, carefree and wild
Such the fantasy in my reality

I saw you rise up from the waves
A jewel washed from the sea
Unattainable, a fairy tale
And I, lost in your story

I saw you in black with eyes so sad
Wondered at what it could be
To make it all seem possible
To give you the reality in your fantasy

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1 posted 2003-07-24 03:47 PM


PK, you've not lost your fine touch
with the ink, and quill.  Well done, Sir.

PKreturns
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2 posted 2003-07-24 03:56 PM


Lady, I believe I have. But your reply leaves me hope....thank you sincerely.
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3 posted 2003-07-24 04:16 PM


"I saw you rise up from the waves
A jewel washed from the sea
Unattainable, a fairy tale
And I, lost in your story
"

I absolutely love this part, and the entire poem.....

JingleBear
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4 posted 2003-07-24 05:27 PM


I enjoyed reading this. Very picturesque.
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