navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » A Thousand Tears
Open Poetry #27
Post A Reply Post New Topic A Thousand Tears Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178


0 posted 2003-07-24 10:16 AM



And I pray
Upon
A single
Tear.

And yearn to cry
A thousand
More -

So sweet
The tender hand
That wipes
Away
Each
Tear.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-07-24 10:19 AM


Ericc
A beautiful write.

Patricia
Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
2 posted 2003-07-24 10:20 AM


To have a gentle and understanding hand to dry the tears from your cheeks...Oh, Eric...indeed, you are blessed.

Just beautiful, my friend.

Patricia  

ambrish
Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India
3 posted 2003-07-24 10:28 AM


so touching
beautifull

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2003-07-24 10:31 AM


Eric~

A
tear
in fall
captured
beautifully
in versing
from you
softly~


Lovely your write~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

VOE
Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119
From the land of Camelot
5 posted 2003-07-24 10:34 AM


Yes, Ericc, this is so tender, and holds such longing......may you always know the touch of this love...~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
6 posted 2003-07-24 10:42 AM


Beautiful. I can picture tender fingers gently touching a tear streaked face and maybe a tender kiss.
Good one
Bon-Bon

HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
7 posted 2003-07-24 11:20 AM


beautifully expressed Eric
So soft and tender

Hope

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2003-07-24 11:43 AM


..and each tear drop gently cleanses the soul...
Lovely dear Eric.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
9 posted 2003-07-24 02:40 PM


Eric, I love your poetry. I hope you know that
I'm one of your biggest fans.
Hugs  
Ethel

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2003-07-24 02:43 PM


Nice...James
Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
11 posted 2003-07-24 03:32 PM


Sweet words, indeed...

Beautiful!

~Tier

Lady In White
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799
USA
12 posted 2003-07-24 04:16 PM



Then I pray
that you
only cry
tears of joy

to receive
such a hand

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
13 posted 2003-07-24 06:10 PM


A tender hand
or maybe
a tender kiss ...
So sweet
indeed!
Each tear
a gem
sparkling
in rainbow
colors,
touching
the heart.

Beautiful, so beautiful.
Loving you, Margherita


Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
14 posted 2003-07-24 06:43 PM


Ericc

Tears-touching you, touching words-touching me.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » A Thousand Tears

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary