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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
a head full of mustard gas or something as disrupting I saw my ex wife with a bodyguard sent her my condolences after all we still live in the same building down at the Carnevale my head was stuffed full of mushrooms and the lights were rather inviting I must say the girl who won best prize shouldve been exiled to the lower east side but my neighbor looked great in her glitter and rising peacocks bloom not my wife, mind you not even my ex wife just a redhead that I’d had the occasion to later circumvent on the phone I finally reached the one i love she had nearly been seduced by a dutchman and his studious wife we recoiled at the horror of our respective evenings and cackled at the joviality we achieve when in one anothers distant embrace on nights like this there is little doubt about why I love you the way that I do |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 very cool! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
funny and sweet |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I swear, I don't know how you do it--but when you write "gray tones" I get depressed, but when you write "happy" I get positively giddy! You managed "cute" and "sweet" without being trite. I DO hope this one is for real for ya Drex. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very good write,i got the full picture in my mind. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
lol Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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