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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2003-07-23 07:05 PM

Believe

Would thou pull down yon skies’ blue clouds
That one might walk in their cool mist
Where no one might see us within
Nor tender of a lover’s kiss?

Would thou aspire to bring to me
Neptune's seas to cover my skin
To feel them undulate as I
Grow from its warm to storm within?

Would thou request a leaf from me
That mysteries joy, mine alone
Were to fall where our love might lay
That carries us to blue skies home?

Bring me the mist and sea and leaf
And I shall speak of my beliefs.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-24-2003 10:44 AM).]

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

1 posted 2003-07-23 07:30 PM

Bring me the mist and sea and leaf
And I shall speak of my beliefs.

Lady, this is beautiful. He must show his devotion and gain your trust before you share your beliefs.  Ahh...I know how difficult it is to trust...to allow him to know the real person.  I have battled this one...and I did surrender. Our relationship is better for it.

(I hope I read this correctly, Lady.  This is what it meant to me.)

I enjoy your writing.

Patricia

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-07-23 07:36 PM

The mist and sea and leaf most assuredly would be on their way if he were to read your moving words.

Love & Light,
EA

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2003-07-23 08:26 PM

Would thou allow me to tuck this away in the mists of me mothy library?

LADY..this is LOVELY!!!!
written like a whisper...
very very nice.

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-07-23 09:06 PM

Would thou request a leaf from me
That mysteries joy, mine alone
Were to fall where our love might lay
That carries us to blue skies home?

Bring me the mist and sea and leaf
And I shall speak of my beliefs.

Lady In White, this is so beautiful.
I love it.

Hugs

Ethel

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2003-07-23 09:12 PM

Lady...this reads like a whisper, yet is so full of passion. Beautiful!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-07-23 09:12 PM

"Bring me the mist and sea and leaf
And I shall speak of my beliefs."

Ah...this is simply beautiful, Lady.
VERY nicely penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-07-23 10:41 PM

So pretty, just like the lady~

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

8 posted 2003-07-23 10:46 PM

This is beautiful just like the writer.I still have a hard time trusting.Very well done.
angelblueyes

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

9 posted 2003-07-24 11:52 AM

Very beautiful sonnet...and I agree with V, those last 2 lines, ouch, they are so cool.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

10 posted 2003-07-25 04:09 PM

I've "mist" your sea,
Let me lift your leaf,
Then we will "sea,"
What lies beneathe.

oops

Beautiful poem, Lady.

[This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (07-25-2003 04:09 PM).]

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

11 posted 2003-07-25 04:16 PM

Very romantic..

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2003-07-25 04:24 PM

Very beautiful dear Lady.
~Soft smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

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