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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-15 03:04 AM


wrote this for earth angel because her fantasy poem took me to places ive never been and heres what i saw hope she enjoys reading it as much as i enjoyed writing it
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            Angel of the night sing for me a song
          That will send me to the world of dreams
                    Taking me to far-away plains
                          Where fantasy breaths

                           As I enter that world
                               The fairies play
                      They’re sweet lovely tunes
                         While calling my name

                      The unicorns gallop along
                          They’re white coats
                           Glowing in the sun
                    As they ride through the lakes
                  The Mermaids splash them for fun


                   Suddenly smoke fills my vision
                 As I look around and see the dragon
                             Its eyes glowing red
                                Opens its mouth
                   Breathing the most deadliest fires

                    Out of the forest in the distance
                                Come the elves
                      With their bows and arrows
                           Aiming at the dragon
                                   And myself

               I watch as the arrows flow overhead
                           Piecing the dragon
                         As It cries out in pain
                         And falls to the ground
                       With a mighty loud thud

           The noise echoes far in my fantasy world
                 Waking all the creatures of myth
                 Slowly the creatures turn to dust
                 As the sun shines in on my face


[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-15-2003 04:57 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-15 04:54 AM


beautiful! wow! I'm sure she will love it, just like I do!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-06-15 09:38 AM


BRAVO! It is great to honor another writer with a poem like this, RedStone.
Bet EA'll get a big smile.

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-06-15 10:29 AM


This is very lovely AND powerful! Enjoyed! And Earth Angel will love it!
Love, Margherita

... and I love the Unicorns ....

Kahlil
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4 posted 2003-06-15 10:48 AM


This is just delightful, RedStone...I want to go there, too!
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-06-15 12:01 PM


Well this certainly was a VERY pleasant surprise! I have the biggest smile on my face as I write this reply!

I LOVE your poem! It is poetry after my own heart! Thank you very much!

~ May your wondrous imagination take you wherever you wish to go...

Luvin' hugs,
Earth Angel

daniel_martin
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london
6 posted 2003-06-15 12:26 PM


too tired for a critique, but i'll give you this much.. it's sound. sound rhythm, sound imagery, not too many cliches and a good cadence surrounding it.

i like it.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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7 posted 2003-06-15 07:59 PM


Nice job Lee

Yes Linda tends to take us places
for sure

What a lovely tribute
*smiling*
xxoo

A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2003-06-15 08:08 PM


I enjoyed this poem reminded me of the movie "Legend" with Tom cruise. It was very mystical and magical...
Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-02-02 11:57 PM


i bet she loves it!

and ARH is right, its very mystical

ARCTIC WIND

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