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PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2003-07-23 10:10 AM

I’m dreaming of a white rose offered to me
I take her in cradling hands,
A gift that is given ever so freely
Her petals soft as the finest sand

Fair white rose, fairest of all
Plucked from the thorny bush
Oh how I can hear her lilting call
From all other roses I forsook

Holding close to breathe her in
A kiss now, mentioned not by name
Through lips red and moistened
Let the moment do all the proclaim

I suspend this breath inhaled
To cheat this dream beyond the pale

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-07-23 10:14 AM

Welcome to Passions! I see we now have yet another wonderfully romantic poet joining our poetic family!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-07-23 10:20 AM

Holding close to breathe her in
A kiss now, mentioned not by name
Through lips red and moistened
Let the moment do all the proclaim

PK, what a beautiful love poem!!
And this hopeless romantic loves it, too!!

Hugs

Ethel

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-07-23 01:58 PM

*SIGH* oh, to be a white rose petal

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2003-07-23 02:02 PM

again...you make us ladies swoon....very nice

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2003-07-23 02:20 PM

ahhhhhhhhhhh the romance is back...PK when i think of you...i think of autumn...h

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2003-07-23 04:17 PM

Thy couplet takes all that was
to give this love a gentle pause

~*~

PK, it is so good to see you back,
as gracious, and as delightful as ever.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2003-07-23 06:11 PM

Poignant.

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

8 posted 2003-07-23 06:16 PM

Ah! The beauty of the white rose and her innocence. Lovely
Bon-Bon

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2003-07-23 07:27 PM

PK...lovely....now breathe!

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

10 posted 2003-07-23 07:43 PM

Holding close to breathe her in
A kiss now, mentioned not by name
Through lips red and moistened
Let the moment do all the proclaim

Oh my, how eloquently romantic...an exquisite write.

Welcome to Passions! I am looking forward to reading more!

Patricia

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