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Webbing
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Webbing I feel the heat, with each touch as I straighten and press my thoughts until all that is there, are pictures in my mind of all those words that tease me into desiring you. There is a softness within you that belies the mask you wear. The sharing of a dance lingering, as the spinning of my words threads itself in silken feel, the fantasy of the day posting itself, sealed and sent to that place deep inside that holds onto promises to come. That voice, not heard often enough to recognize the meaning behind. That silence too long between forming a web, that strings me along until I must sever its hold by stretching until I can reach out and free myself from its lacing. Then and only then, can the nakedness that completes me, be surrendered to the heart's wish and I become yours. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Julie... the sun is shining and for the moment, all is write (right) with the world  M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-11-2003 03:43 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely written... and I enjoyed the tone as well as the form... glad all is write with your world |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
You were writing this to me...right sweetie?....fine write....and thank you...LOL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Ron, a little vacation, a visit with my mother (who is in the vicinity for almost a month)and a positive attitude...helps. AND it is not raining today...YET M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am writing this to anyone who wants to think it is for them... I am not too choosey...j/k M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well its thundering now...the rain is on its way.. Nice Write Susan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and we were supposed to get rain today and it was a beautiful day with me staying inside...oh well maybe tomorrow... *s thanks M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love to read you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Dixie...you always find the favorites of mine that slip away sometimes... hugs M |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Then and only then, can the nakedness that completes me, be surrendered to the heart's wish and I become yours." Lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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