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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-07-22 08:18 PM

“IF ONLY ONE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
There’s no one home deep inside me,
today will be another gone by,
empty of thoughts in my mind,
if only one now I could hear sigh…

There’s no one home in my heart,
tonight will be another gone by,
empty like a lost soul that’s stranded,
if only one now I could hear sigh…

I would give the moon to one fair,
if not alone this time would go by,
the stars above would be yours,
if only one now I could hear sigh…
~~~~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2003-07-22 08:20 PM

Oh, Bill!

I have missed reading your beautiful words and I'm so glad to be able to read them again........and sigh!

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-07-22 08:22 PM

...*SIGH*...

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-07-22 08:22 PM

Very moving words you've penned her Bill!

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-07-22 08:25 PM

*sigh*
and the good kind, too.

perfect

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-07-22 08:29 PM

Hope along with the moon and the stars that good things happen for you Bill...James

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

6 posted 2003-07-22 08:51 PM

Here is another
~*~ SIGH~*~

Bon-Bon: wave:

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-07-22 09:14 PM

Such winsome yearning expressed here. Your talents touch the depths of the heart. TD

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

8 posted 2003-07-22 10:01 PM

I feel the yearning and longing in this.You touch the heart with your words.May you find much happiness in life.
angelblueyes

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-07-23 06:51 AM

*******sign*********
couldn't resist.............
so forlorn, mr. poet.......but so so
full of love and warmth, as always

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2003-07-23 07:22 AM

So very beautiful and touching ...
The yearning is felt, dear Bill.
May your lonesome heart quickly be soothed.
Love, Margherita

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

11 posted 2003-07-23 09:26 AM

You always seem to know just how to reach out and tug at the heart strings, Bill..

Lonesome and wistful and yearning, yes.. but so very full of feeling.. and you can feel.. this is a blessing, my friend, you can feel and even more a blessing, share those feelings

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-07-23 11:13 AM

I'm sighing! I'm sighing! Can you hear me?...

Loving hugs,
EA

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

13 posted 2003-07-23 11:16 AM

You know I seem to have a story for everything...I got internet access at home..went online last night to do some serious repling...and couldn't remember my password...ughhhhhhhh

So, anyway...I read this last night and loved it. That is what I wanted to say..lol

Susan C.

Ladybug
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 236
Massachusetts

14 posted 2003-07-23 11:18 AM

Wow, so sweet and beautiful! Love the last stanza...I'm melting, hee hee

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-07-23 11:53 AM

I would give the moon to one fair,
if not alone this time would go by,
the stars above would be yours,
if only one now I could hear sigh…

Awwww, *sigh*

This is so sweet, Bill.

:
Hugs

Ethel

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

16 posted 2003-07-23 08:19 PM

BC:

There’s no one home in my heart,
tonight will be another gone by,
empty like a lost soul that’s stranded,
if only one now I could hear sigh

You write of sadness, loneliness and deep emotional hurt as only you can do. This is exceptional.

Ariana

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

17 posted 2003-07-23 08:41 PM

Bill...I hear such yearning in your words...could feel the ache. Wishing you love, and a sigh!

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

18 posted 2003-07-23 09:54 PM

I sigh with tears in my eyes. Oh Bill...this touched my heart so.

Patricia

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

19 posted 2003-07-23 10:10 PM

this one ached

well written
& I look forward to reading more of your writing
Mike

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . .

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

20 posted 2003-07-24 08:52 PM

a moving and sentimental piece, enjoyed

IntoTheFlames
Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

21 posted 2003-07-25 05:14 PM

very beautiful poem! I think you've earned another sigh! ~*sigh*~

~*Summer*~

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

22 posted 2003-07-25 05:49 PM

Bill...A soft,tender write that shows th longing of your heart. I hope yo find such a person...to sigh over you. ***Ivy Rose

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

23 posted 2003-07-25 05:51 PM

Bill, I dont like to see your heart frowning so . . .
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-26-2003 07:56 AM).]

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