Open Poetry #27 |
I Have Faith In Who I Am |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * You dismantled my heart And kept the sun from my view Now when you look inside my soul You are able to see straight through I'm just a shadow of myself Since you took your love away I was so stupid to have thought That with me you'd want to stay You have hurt so many others And left a trail of misery Many hearts have been broken The last one belonged to me But I have faith in who I am 'tho deep inside there lays a hole You managed to bruise my spirit But were unable to crush my soul * * * * I should point out that this was not written from personal experience, purely fiction. I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - an artist as you could only write of so many different emotions without being in them... BC |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
You have hurt so many others And left a trail of misery Many hearts have been broken The last one belonged to me But I have faith in who I am 'tho deep inside there lays a hole You managed to bruise my spirit But were unable to crush my soul **** ...are you looking through my soul? This was wonderful Sue! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Sue!! So very much enjoy your style of writing. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"You have hurt so many others And left a trail of misery Many hearts have been broken The last one belonged to me" Oooh, I feel this. Enjoyed the picture, as well. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exceptional write Sue. Welcome back, it is nice to read you again. You conveyed the emotions of this piece so well. Happy to hear it is fictional, for the pain is all too real. Hugs, TD |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sue you are a wondrous writer and I enjoy each write of yours a little more each time.Although this is your fiction I feel this.I'm putting this one in the library.Beautifully done. angelblueyes |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Great poem and I'm so glad it's fiction! Betty Lou Hebert |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sue ~~ Such powerful emotions in this poem. I'm sure on some level many can relate to this kind of hurt. Huggles ~~ Marti |
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