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Coastal Blue |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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The way it is or was repeated how darker thoughts would be defeated a sunlit blue sky screen conciousness of silent screams poked through tall stalks with the fingers of the hands stretched and pointed... then curled, disjointed fingers attached to palms and wrists the cobalt blue...seafaring hue the way it was repeated sun spots defeated the ecstasy of a sky watch mariner sighted up a notch touched sepals of wildflower sorts laced a myriad of coastal ports feast on the open face of blue and a daytime watch for you [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-22-2003 09:07 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan The search never stops, enjoyed. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
"inform me of different contemporary poetry styles" I inform you your writing is awesome and I love every word. Jason [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-22-2003 06:15 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enjoyed the ecstatic sky watch!  Warm hugs, EA |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
As always...I'm deeply impressed. Great job! Eric |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Sy Yes it does when we continue to search through the heavens Linda, can never get enough of the sunsets  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-22-2003 09:09 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Eric, Jason so good this is appreciated..much lighter than some of my commentaries for sure [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-23-2003 10:03 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I must humbly say, you write the blue like an expert...and I can appreciate the view. TD |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Diamond, I am finding after many years if painting that it isn't a question of it being more or less difficult when it comes to putting tonalities into words I find that it becomes a question of how articulate one can be  |
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