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sole mate blues
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sole mate blues |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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in seeking sole mate left hemisphere overpowered by right brained fantasy imagination soles stepped over or on too often miss stepping stuck in muddy ruts again seeking sole mate hoping to regain centered point no sense of gravity fell seeking fantasy fulcrum to balance or triangulate not strangulate the outer limits of my reach tripped again over my sole soul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Very clever, very cute--and can be very frustrating!  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ya' know I'm not sure which math course I missed. But it didn't include these metaphors. So I'll take a chance and tell you I think this is a cool write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write...yer so cool!  ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Linda, thanks, glad if you got a grin from it. Larry, Math metaphors? LOL. Hmm, love yer sole soul Nancy, thank you for taking a moment to read and comment |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Lots of sole in this poem...I enjoyed it a great deal.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly crafted! Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Scorpio?  Eric?  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Midnitesun - tripped over your sole soul eh... Neat write... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hehe, thanks BC, glad you enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have a wonderful outlook, that graces our eyes. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Midnite...Enjoyed the play with words and the spirit that smiles. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I agree with the rest.I enjoyed the way you played with this.It was different and I enjoyed it. angelblueyes |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Few things scare me; the thought of a sole soul mate produces sheer terror. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
TD, Martie, Angel, ice THANK YOU! I'm delighted you enjoyed this write, which was a fun write for me. Yes, ice, I think a sole soul mate is a scary thought for many of us. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"stuck in muddy ruts" Ohhhhhh how I know this state. Love your sole/soul. Enjoyed |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It made me smile and continue to enjoy the morning, and that's a very, very good thing Pepper |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Kacy  I sure don't want a sole soul mate, either. LOL  Hugs  Ethel |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
The sole thing i like about this is... your soul. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
clever as usual, and i do belive there is no such thing as a sole soulmate,,anymore...why lock yourself in with so many solefish out there? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
love ya mind Kacy!  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at your reply Michelle. And thanking EACH of you for your time and thoughts on this write. |
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