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Friendship Lost
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Friendship Lost |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA 
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Friendship Lost I recall that day, as if it was yesterday, When things did not well start For on this forsaken day My friend and I did part. We had been friends for ages past Yet we learned to hate Severing the ties that held fast Two friends to each other’s fate. We met then as two strangers Two enemies held at bay A mockery of friendship Thus marked the beginning of the fray. Blame and insults ran unchecked Between us, that day Pain and anger reared anew As, friendship… passed away. We parted then our separate ways Each bitter, hurt and sad Knowing that we’d lost that day We thought we always had. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...james |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Anwaar - this calls to me of the civil strive of the 1860's when the war between the states broke out - as brother and brother, once friends, took separate sides and life, as they knew it, was never again the same. A very good write, Sir... thank you. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
And the sad part is it probably never had to be. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Friends of the road, but not for life. People come in and out of our lives. Each relationship has its inherent gifts and lessons. Warm hugs, EA |
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AnamCara Junior Member
since 2003-06-25
Posts 41Canada |
Thank you for sharing, ...as we are all connected and just taking turns sharing, maybe there is no true loss or gain. Beautiful expressions Anwaar! Love, Angela |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
James, Lady and Shararose, Thank you for your comments...appreciate the read. Earthangel, 'Friends of the road, but not for life.' Beautifully said....could not have said it better myself. Anamcara, I agree totally. Anwaar |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
To lose a friend is a painful experience...and you expressed your pain clearly...I do hope in time you will reconcile with your friend.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Maybe as time passes friendship will build once again.We have friendships for a reason, a season and for a lifetime. Good write. Bon-Bon  |
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