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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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You are nothing more than the sum of your mistakes A father's judgment |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ouch! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
i sense a slight disturbance here... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
pretty much karilea yeah Hey Liz easy there Obi Wan lol |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Oh how I can relate to the words you have penned. Great write Raph! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
the judgement of one man rings true in the mind of the man only |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
That's how we learn....by making mistakes. Show me someone who has never made a mistake in their life, and I will show you a fool. hugs, Chris  "At one glance |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks all for the most part i ignore him but dounts have a way of snaking through |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
dounts? is that doubts, or donuts? that just proves it, when you're a dad, you'll be homer simpson. be my dad? y'know i know this. grrrrr. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Oh, Man... these are some pretty severe thoughts... "You are nothing more than the sum of your mistakes..." Harsh reality. We see the light of those |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Oops I meant doubts but !....... mmmm donuts...garrrghhhhh thanks guys |
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