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Open Poetry #27

Driftwood Splinter

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-21 10:45 AM

A hinged stare,
a voiceless word.

An enclosed hand.
Soft, driftwood
splinter.

Watching the
moon fall from
the highest point.

Liquefying
the stars,
that cannot be
attained.

A backward tear,
barren lips.

Soft, driftwood
splinter.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-07-21 11:36 AM

Meghan -
you know
this reminded me of when I was at
the beach with my son . . .
He kept bringing me driftwood
and I just stared at each piece
realizing that is exactly what I am,
what many of us are . . .
a splinter . . .
I see everything ina different light
this . . . hit home today
beautiful writing
xxoo

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-07-21 11:46 AM

Kaoru
Enjoyed the read.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-07-21 12:22 PM

A backward tear,
barren lips

did i mention you have a way with words? damn..btw yeah don't lose the piercings

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

4 posted 2003-07-21 12:24 PM

heg Meg..enjoyed

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

5 posted 2003-07-21 12:27 PM

this is hushed

and nice

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