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Open Poetry #27

Sans Fantasy

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

0 posted 2003-07-20 09:26 PM

Perhaps it was the morning sun
or the way the breeze fluttered the curtains
into the room
creating my mood
and stirring my desire
for something over the edge

It wasn’t a face
or a memory
not a wild dream
only me
on the edge
there in the fluttering breeze

Billowing then
and crashing waves
heard the birds sing
and the bells ring
stolen moments in my room
over the edge without a fantasy

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-21 12:03 PM

This is just..exellent.

Loved the style.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-07-21 12:07 PM

Billowing then
and crashing waves
heard the birds sing
and the bells ring
stolen moments in my room
over the edge without a fantasy

This is an excellent write. I enjoyed reading.

"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." Gary~ Heart hugs, Ethel

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-07-21 12:12 PM

thank you. sometimes facing reality feels good...

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

4 posted 2003-07-21 02:24 AM

Lovely bit of reality then

Enjoyed this very much.

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

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