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No Light (Senryu) |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough 
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With you I am bleak Apart from you I am grey ...The line has been drawn |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Reminds me of the saying: "Ya can't live with 'em and ya can't live without 'em!" Healing hugs, EA P.S. I don't know whether I mentioned your new photo before or not, but you really are a beautiful woman! So you are not only beautiful on the inside as I have gathered from your poetry, you are beautiful on the outside as well!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifuul post from a beautiful poetess. Nicely written. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Thank you Earth Angel, and yes...that is kinna what was going on when I wrote this peice. And thank you so much for the compliment. You know us mama's we very seldom get told that...haha, you made my day! Thanks to you as well Enchantress! Poetess, I just love that word! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Very nice Tima . . . it is hard for me to write a senyru You did a beautiful job xxoo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful. Thought provoking, concise...well done. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The line is fine indeed, after all, we can only keep scribbling for so long. Wonderfully done, and to the point good angel poetess. |
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