Open Poetry #27 |
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The Only Good Reason is the One You Gave Me |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow ![]() |
Excuses, she crossed oceans. There's nothing quite like That kiss goodbye. Eyes dismal, walking into why and maybe. Spawn is, because. Skimming her hand above the salt. Excuses, there is no better reason. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very powerful |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
spawn is because tough enough |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very well done... |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
ello Meg, I really loved this one. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing!! Love this. Hugs. ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
succinct powerful well spawned |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The only good reason is the one you gave me." Reminded me of a situation where a woman kept giving me some good reasons why we shouldn't be together, and she finally convinced me, yet she still wanted to be together...James |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You have great judgment for line breaks and pauses. Always gives your writing that edge. Great use of imagery too. keep them coming need a little more grit in open |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
At times it is easier to accept a reason, than not to be given any reason at all... Lovin' hugs, EA |
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