Open Poetry #27 |
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Grab the Gold |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
~*~ When seas of change have crossed my path, it's often been unnerving. They caused me strife, upset my life, and off I went a-swerving! As Father Time goes passing by, I've gone more with the flow. I may not put, in my whole foot, but I'll test waters with a toe. When I have grown accustomed, to the temperature of seas, I've inched my body into, the water to my knees. It's then I rest, and reaccesss, the brand new situation. I separate the wheat from chaff, and plan new destination. When I am in my comfort zone, and sense not any danger, I open up like lotus cup, and act not like a stranger. I then wade in, up to my chin, with little trepidation. I grab the gold, let go of old, and gain my liberation! ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-21-2003 08:07 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Linda - damn this is what I have been doing wrong all this time - see usually I just dive right in: I may not put, in my whole foot, but test waters with my toe. love this Lady xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Fabulous read,,, as the wheat falls heavy as gold a gentle breeze blows the chaff away... A voice of honesty |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I like, I like! enjoyed the journey you took me on -thanks for sharing ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
littlewing ~ I'm pleased that you "love" this poem, Sue! That gives added meaning to my writing! ![]() Have a day full of wonder! Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Q ~ "Fabulous" poetic response! Thank you! ![]() May the breezes be gentle and cleansing! Loves'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
RD-B ~ You "like" poem!--I like reply! ![]() Be happy! Luvin' hugs 'n smiles, EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This was such an uplifting poem Linda~ Love your spirit gal!!! |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
WOW! This is just wonderful Earth Angel! The words within your poetry gave me so many thoughts as I read them, over and over again. "As Father Time goes passing by, I've gone more with the flow. I may not put, in my whole foot, just testing waters with a toe." -not sure, but wanting to try and see what it's all about. "When I have grown accustomed, to the temperature of seas, I've inched my body into, the water to my knees." -realizing that it wasn't as bad, and wanting to experience more of the same. "When I am in my comfort zone, and sense not any danger, I open up like lotus cup, and act not like a stranger." -FINALLY! Letting go and giving way to the emotion, situation, or experience. "I then wade in, up to my chin, with little trepidation. I grab the gold, let go of old, and gain my liberation!" -This one speaks a thousand healing words! ![]() I just LOVED it Earth Angel... ---going to the library--- A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life, to be thankful for a good one. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like you've got your act together, very soothing words of hope. e.a. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
some very good advice especially for people who lack tenacity ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I then wade in, up to my chin, with little trepidation. I grab the gold, let go of old, and gain my liberation! Linda, this is a very interesting poem. I liked. ![]() Hugs ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BluesSerende ~ Kind of you to say so, Dear Bluesy One! ![]() ~ May you rise and shine each day as does the sun. Loves'n hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Timothysangel ~ Timothy does indeed, have an angel! "WOW" is muy WOW to me! This is definitely one of the most indepth replies that I have ever received! Very thoughtful response and it pleases me that you are adding it to your library. ![]() May the sun, the moon and the stars forever light your way in life. Loving hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Inkedgoddess ~ Let me just say that getting my act together has bee a trial and error process! LOL ![]() "very soothing words of hope"---I really appreciate you saying so. Thank you! Loves'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ecrivan ~ I make every attempt to "walk my talk"--and I can actually pull it off at times! ![]() ~ May your higher conscience be your guide in life Luvs'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel Mae ~ I am pleased that you "liked" it! ![]() ~ May you make wonderful memories today for your tomorrows! Love & Light, Linda Louise |
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