Open Poetry #27 |
Grab the Gold |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~*~ When seas of change have crossed my path, it's often been unnerving. They caused me strife, upset my life, and off I went a-swerving! As Father Time goes passing by, I've gone more with the flow. I may not put, in my whole foot, but I'll test waters with a toe. When I have grown accustomed, to the temperature of seas, I've inched my body into, the water to my knees. It's then I rest, and reaccesss, the brand new situation. I separate the wheat from chaff, and plan new destination. When I am in my comfort zone, and sense not any danger, I open up like lotus cup, and act not like a stranger. I then wade in, up to my chin, with little trepidation. I grab the gold, let go of old, and gain my liberation! ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-21-2003 08:07 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Linda - damn this is what I have been doing wrong all this time - see usually I just dive right in: I may not put, in my whole foot, but test waters with my toe. love this Lady xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Fabulous read,,, as the wheat falls heavy as gold a gentle breeze blows the chaff away... A voice of honesty |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I like, I like! enjoyed the journey you took me on -thanks for sharing |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
littlewing ~ I'm pleased that you "love" this poem, Sue! That gives added meaning to my writing! Have a day full of wonder! Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Q ~ "Fabulous" poetic response! Thank you! May the breezes be gentle and cleansing! Loves'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
RD-B ~ You "like" poem!--I like reply! Be happy! Luvin' hugs 'n smiles, EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This was such an uplifting poem Linda~ Love your spirit gal!!! |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
WOW! This is just wonderful Earth Angel! The words within your poetry gave me so many thoughts as I read them, over and over again. "As Father Time goes passing by, I've gone more with the flow. I may not put, in my whole foot, just testing waters with a toe." -not sure, but wanting to try and see what it's all about. "When I have grown accustomed, to the temperature of seas, I've inched my body into, the water to my knees." -realizing that it wasn't as bad, and wanting to experience more of the same. "When I am in my comfort zone, and sense not any danger, I open up like lotus cup, and act not like a stranger." -FINALLY! Letting go and giving way to the emotion, situation, or experience. "I then wade in, up to my chin, with little trepidation. I grab the gold, let go of old, and gain my liberation!" -This one speaks a thousand healing words! I just LOVED it Earth Angel... ---going to the library--- A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life, to be thankful for a good one. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like you've got your act together, very soothing words of hope. e.a. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
some very good advice especially for people who lack tenacity |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I then wade in, up to my chin, with little trepidation. I grab the gold, let go of old, and gain my liberation! Linda, this is a very interesting poem. I liked. Hugs Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BluesSerende ~ Kind of you to say so, Dear Bluesy One! ~ May you rise and shine each day as does the sun. Loves'n hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Timothysangel ~ Timothy does indeed, have an angel! "WOW" is muy WOW to me! This is definitely one of the most indepth replies that I have ever received! Very thoughtful response and it pleases me that you are adding it to your library. May the sun, the moon and the stars forever light your way in life. Loving hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Inkedgoddess ~ Let me just say that getting my act together has bee a trial and error process! LOL "very soothing words of hope"---I really appreciate you saying so. Thank you! Loves'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ecrivan ~ I make every attempt to "walk my talk"--and I can actually pull it off at times! ~ May your higher conscience be your guide in life Luvs'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel Mae ~ I am pleased that you "liked" it! ~ May you make wonderful memories today for your tomorrows! Love & Light, Linda Louise |
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