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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-20 12:55 PM

Would I ?

if I stand
in your eyes
in the desert
would I drown

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-20-2003 12:58 AM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced

1 posted 2003-07-20 12:58 PM

hmmmmm?

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-07-20 02:46 AM

???

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-07-20 03:42 AM

I like this, Helen...you made me think.
Enjoyed the image this brought to mind, as well.
Nicely done, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"it is better to be a part of beauty for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-20-2003 03:43 AM).]

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

4 posted 2003-07-20 03:57 AM

Helen:

I guess it depends if those eyes are not an oasis xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-20-2003 03:58 AM).]

Kethry
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Victoria Australia

5 posted 2003-07-20 04:06 AM

I guess it depends on the depth as well as the breathlessness.

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

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Southern Abstentia

6 posted 2003-07-20 02:34 PM

drown in
fire
or burn
in rain

everyone is
the moon
in the sahara

Wind

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7 posted 2003-07-20 02:40 PM

fits that mysterious thing you've got going on...

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2003-07-20 02:53 PM

it's not really so mysterious

Wind

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9 posted 2003-07-20 02:57 PM

I think it is..your opinion

garysgirl

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10 posted 2003-07-20 03:05 PM

Helen, I like the way you made us
think in this one.
Very good writing.

Me

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

11 posted 2003-07-20 06:21 PM

No, though at first it would feel like it, then you will expand to fill the infinite.

Larry C

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12 posted 2003-07-20 10:47 PM

It depends...was I crying?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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