Open Poetry #27 |
No Never (tanka) |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
. . . You can cry for love You can shout out loud your fears Bare your heart in rhyme Pray the Lord for direction But, never......ever....cry...wolf ~ . . . Chris Barker July 2003 ~~~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a beautiful Tanka - thank you, Chris. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes!! Very beautiful and oh SO true Chris!! ~Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Karilea & Nancylee - my muse was a tad upset this morning and had to get something off her mind...as well as my own. "At one glance |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good thoughts, I understand the feeling. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris...I'm glad you wrote this...helps me as well! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sandra & Martie.... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A most timely write, Chris.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hey chris. did you know the wolf is my favorite animal? great poem..people should never lie about serious things |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Great poem! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
thankyou scorpio, Wind & El_C for reading and commenting. Wind, I love wolves too...the animal kind I mean...lol. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Chris never cried wolf she didn't even cry bear but she cried softly after all she is human and she's my hero Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dearest Interloper. What can I say? Nothing other than thankyou - you whose wisdom and belief make me repeat these words from a song, "So somewhere in my youth, or childhood, I must have done something good." [This message has been edited by Nightshade (07-19-2003 03:32 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...I heard that. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chris - you're right, never ever... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - thankyou sweetie! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I waited a bit to respond to your Tanka. It is so well expressed and I love the picture. I am ready to put an end to this day...and hope that tomorrow brings life and love and hope for us all. Thank you Chris M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Amen to that Maureen. To-morrow is another day. A fresh start, a new beginning. Thankyou for reading and commenting. |
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