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Open Poetry #27

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-07-18 06:28 PM

Hospitable domains sink deeply in the brush of silence
In tapered afternoon, a drinking in of mystic vibrance
This opulence that circumvents the rough and rowdy ponder
But taking me into the folds of peace as far as I can wander

Have I begun the transient flight into another chapter?
Or could it be that this I see is what was promised ever after?
It matters not for now the found remunerates all losses
And as a whisper on the pool, all conscious fear it tosses

Here to remain a sovereign reign against the storms forthcoming
A bit delayed but still displayed in distant climaxed drumming
A sponge soaked full of miracle to keep in reverent fervor
And visit when the time has been too long to travel further

Copyright Kkh 7/18/03

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-07-18 07:46 PM

I like this one!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-07-19 03:32 PM

excellent write n read,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-07-20 10:39 PM

Here to remain a sovereign reign against the storms forthcoming
A bit delayed but still displayed in distant climaxed drumming
A sponge soaked full of miracle to keep in reverent fervor
And visit when the time has been too long to travel further

Yet another thought provoking gem of a poem from you TD~

Much enjoyed!

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